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on: 02-27-2005
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I'm currently adapting an action drama for television, which I think will be a huge hit. I call it: Pumpkin Puss & Funboy. |
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2-28-2005 @ 02:57:25 AM |
| Posted By : Sensekhmet |
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Hey, the guy in the white suit is actually aiming his gun!
Needs more hip or gangsta style shooting.
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2-28-2005 @ 03:46:12 PM |
| Posted By : Skid |
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#2, Well not really, considering he's looking at the camera.
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12-06-2005 @ 11:53:43 PM |
| Posted By : Skid |
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On a whim, I just wrote a first scene for this. Imagine the voice of David Hyde Pierce as Funboy and the voice of Samuel L. Jackson as Pumpkin Puss.
*Fade in. An unidentified city, bitter cold and drizzling rain. A black and gold '68 GTO is parked in an alley, facing a fancy hotel. Inside are PUMPKIN PUSS and FUNBOY, with the former behind the wheel. Both are on a stakeout.*
FB: "What's the matter? You seem moody."
PP: "Nothin', it's just....I'm kinda depressed."
FB: "Come on, buddy, you can tell me."
PP: "It's just my woman...she's been sick. The flu."
FB: "That's pretty rough."
PP: "Got a cigarette?"
*Funboy hands Pumpkin Puss a cigarette.*
PP: "Could you light it for me?"
FB: "Can't you do it?"
PP: "I ain't got no hands, bitch. I'm a pumpkin."
FB: "Oh yeah."
*Lights PP's cigarette. PP takes a drag and nods agreeably.*
FB: "Sorry to hear about your girl, though."
PP: "Girl? She was all woman."
FB: "Was?"
PP: "Before she died."
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12-06-2005 @ 11:53:55 PM |
| Posted By : Skid |
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FB: "You just said she was sick."
PP: "Yeah, then she died! Sick people die sometimes."
FB: "In two minutes?"
PP: "Death can hit you like that." PP snaps his fingers on "that" for emphasis
FB: "Oh, well. Sorry to hear about it."
PP: "It's cool. At least I can always trust you."
A black Cadillac limo pulls up to the fancy hotel. Both PUMPKIN PUSS and FUNBOY ready their sidearms.
PP: "Come on. Let's get in character."
Both exit the vehicle, and run across the street in slow motion to determined-sounding 1980s cop show music, guns blazing, people screaming, and glass shattering everywhere, with an incredible overabundance of ricochet sound effects. Screen freezes as music draws to a close, and the text "Exectutive Producer: Elcunto Prickilini" is superimposed.
I've got a winner with this one, I'm telling you.
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| #8 |
12-06-2005 @ 11:55:28 PM |
| Posted By : ricerocketboy |
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wow. Nice scenes, dude. Holy shit. Are you in any films/screenplay classes, or did you take any in HS?
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12-06-2005 @ 11:57:46 PM |
| Posted By : Skid |
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#8, Well, they were meant to be ridiculously NOT good.
If it's the format you're talking about, I'm kind of a film buff. I'll be taking some acting classes at some point at Meridian Community College, and I've always wanted to be in/make movies.
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12-07-2005 @ 12:05:35 AM |
| Posted By : Skid |
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#11, I'd like to. Naturally, for serious work I'd write something that doesn't have cliched dialogue and inconsistent story elements (two common cop show flubs that I deliberately worked into #6 and #7).
What have you written?
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12-07-2005 @ 12:09:02 AM |
| Posted By : Altima35se2003 |
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#12, The movie is about a raver
The series is a cartoon show about high school stoners. It's got crazy cancon (canadian content), so it stand a better chance of getting made
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